Nick Rizzi
ENGW 1101
Professor Young
Essay 2
5/1/15
Revision Letter
When getting back a draft of an
essay, I follow a very specific process in order to revise the paper. First, I
make sure to read all of the comments on the essay. I take note of what I did
well, and what areas of my paper need some improvement. The area I like to
focus on most is the content of my essay, and how it can be improved. I feel like
grammar and sentence structure can be fixed relatively easily, so that is not
an area that I put too much thought into. I just want to make sure that my
essay flows and that all of my points and giving of a clear message to the
reader.
If I get back an essay and it is
completely marked up and has a bad grade, I may have to consider altering my
revising techniques. In that case, I may just have to use the comments given to
me in order to completely re-write my entire paper. It may be tedious, but it
is easier than trying to fix an essay that is already completely broken. That
being said, knowing that revising will improve my final grade of the paper
inspires me to work harder at it. It may be annoying and frustrating at times,
but, in the end, it is for a good reason.
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